If you get some time, can you tweak the line in the last chapter with the behind the curtain scene to "This sweat of yours, it's such a profound flavor."? I didn't really like how I worded it last time.
>>27984741317 2nd Part
O Something like this, in a place like that...
Here, a tampon.
!?
If anything else happens, feel free to come on over <3
*Karen-sama~<3
*Rattle*
Huh...U-um...
Uwah, there's so much blood...
>>279847430Well, I guess we did learn about tampons in middle school health ed. classes.
*Rip*
Of course there was know way in my wildest dreams that I'd ever think that I'd be using it on myself, though...
...it is really okay though to be putting something like this in my -ussy!?
*Tremble*
But I've gotta use it, since it's a period and all...
*Had to look a lot of it up though*
It seems like tampon's a lot better at stopping blood from leaking out compared to a pad. / It's not like I'm gonna lose my first time to a tampon, so it seems like the better choice...right?
Let's see, so first is mid-waist...
Ugh...I really hope this doesn't hurt...
*Slip...*
*Poke x2*
*Wander x2* (maybe Searching/Circling or something else might fit better)
W-where is it?
Around here...?
How about here? It's not going in.