Thread 280752745

Here it is, we're finally entering the (real?) plot!

Previous Storytime: >>280593077

>>280752745 (OP)

Chapter 5: Outlaw

>>280752745 (OP)
Hey OP!

>>280753660

>>280753669
Hey anon, hope you're enjoying the chapter!

>>280754042
And that's it for today!
Hope you enjoyed it.

Please point out any typo, mistake or error!
Also, check our blog for our releases:
https://historyanons.blogspot.com/

>>280753710
>Hey anon, hope you're enjoying the chapter!
It's an interesting read so far. Chapter 2 is still my favourite

>>280754120
Thanks OP, are you planning to upload these as cbz files anywhere?

>>280754551
;)
>>280754616
There are download links for all our works in our blog:
https://historyanons.blogspot.com/

>>280754858
>There are download links for all our works in our blog:
You callipygian titan

These threads tend to die too quickly

You didn't do it this time but a spoiler OP is less eye-catching even if it's because of artistic nudity

Thanks for redoing chapter 1 with the bigger scans but why not Google Drive anymore

>>280756933
>You didn't do it this time but a spoiler OP is less eye-catching even if it's because of artistic nudity
Yeah, that time was an oversight.
In truth, a mod retroactively spoilered that image; I was particularly tired that day and didn't think about it.
>Thanks for redoing chapter 1 with the bigger scans
We're always trying to make the best of it. :)
>why not Google Drive anymore
After the MangaDex fiasco, we're trying to use more-or-less anonymous uploading methods.

The younger artist is Walter Sickert, posthumously pegged as a Jack the Ripper suspect. Maybe you already noticed but you didn't put a TL note or whatever. It checks out, him being German born and Whistler's apprentice:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walter_Sickert

I think Cuvie did a fakeout of him being a serial killer but not Saucy Jack since Jack didn't take women captive as far as we know, he likely just killed them in the street except the last victim where they were alone for hours in a room together.

Sickert is a sympathetic side character in Alan Moore's From Hell which is about Jack. Check it out.

>>280757582
>The younger artist is Walter Sickert, posthumously pegged as a Jack the Ripper suspect. Maybe you already noticed but you didn't put a TL note or whatever.
It'll probably appear in the next chapter, We haven't checked it yet
>Sickert is a sympathetic side character in Alan Moore's From Hell which is about Jack. Check it out.
I will!

>>280752745 (OP)
>>280594150
>Tomorrow, or the day after, we'll do a storytime for the first chapter, redone with HQ RAWS.
Not yet huh, but the typesetting has a few issues

>>280758838
Sorry, got a little busy and had to postpone it.
Will try tomorrow!

>>280757648
I checked, it's him

>>280752874
>>280753007
>>280753077
Why are they so nonchalant with an immortal, kinda feels like the civilians in Highlander

>>280753110
didn't expect to have an immortal MC introduced after 5 chapters

>>280753183
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QTli1HU9axY

>>280753948
By the way, on Ruskin:
>The cause of Ruskin's "disgust" has led to much conjecture. Mary Lutyens speculated that he rejected Effie because he was horrified by the sight of her pubic hair. Lutyens argued that Ruskin must have known the female form only through Greek statues and paintings of nudes which lacked pubic hair.[238] However, Peter Fuller wrote, "It has been said that he was frightened on the wedding night by the sight of his wife's pubic hair; more probably, he was perturbed by her menstrual blood."[239]

May have been literal a case of *that* manga.

>>280757582
That is literally what happens next chapter.

>>280762992
Maybe his wife had a monster bush

>>280756933
Maybe you should always lead with the nude volume 3 cover

>>280762992
kek
>>280764069
Nice idea, but we'll follow the volume order.

>>280754120
Thank you for posting.

>>280756933
Storytimes tend to need a bump here and there to get going.

>>280762817
He was in the previous ones but not the main focus

>>280752952
S-sorry...

>>280752745 (OP)
>belly on cover
>entire manga is just men talking
i want my money back

>>280772044
Start from the beginning

Bump for readers

>>280777273
Arigato.

In the redone Ch 1 some text is missing here

The line should be "Penitent Saintess Magdalene"

Saintess isn't used in modern English though and using female saint or just saint would depend on context/emphasis

>>280779845
Female saint sounds modern and a bit clunkier than saintess and just using saint would lead to the second instance of saintess being changed to Magdalene

Although St. Magdalene sounds odd by itself since usually her name Mary would be mentioned before it, but that's on Cuvie, then if it's only Magdalene and no Mary you need to put The since it refers to where she's from

"Penitent Saint Mary Magdalene" and "The Magdalene?" is how I'd localize it if not just keeping Saintess in both

>>280780058
The JP explicitly has 聖女, and not the usual form マグダラのマリア of the name. So obviously Cuvie wanted to emphasize her sainthood.

>>280780931
Doesn't the raw have both?

>>280780931
>>280782102

>>280782135
>>280779845
The old version

>>280753948
Thanks for TLing this!

>>280752745 (OP)
>cuvie
i think i recognize that name

>>280768268
>>280784680
;)
>>280784702
Based coomer
>>280779845
>>280782178
Welp, thanks for pointing it out, I'll notify the others!

>>280786919
I'm posting chapter 1 slowly to share and review at the same time, hang on

Leftmost bubble in >>280786775 needs a bit of cleaning

>>280790109
It coudn't be - It couldn't be

Probably should change "there's nothing to do for you" to "there's nothing for you to do"

>>280787504
>>280790242
I'm taking notes of all this, don't worry.

>>280790438
Thanks to you all