Worse than GT, Super and Daima combined.

>>280869245 (OP)
MY HEROES

>>280869245 (OP)
Multiverse is the Tournament of Power if the universes were actually interesting.

>>280869371
Interesting? BUT GOKU FUCKING DIES

>>280869245 (OP)
Well duh, it is a dumb fanfiction written by non writers.

>>280869371
Lol

99% of time, fans who think they can make something better than the original author always make something worse

>>280871531
No adults watching Dragon Ball Z accuse it of having good writing. To parents, it's an obvious kid's show. To do better as a fanfiction writer isn't that hard. But of course, OP is comparing Multiverse to GT, Super, and Daima which are several steps below Dragon Ball Z.

>>280872410
>"watching Dragon Ball Z"
Absolute dimwit. Don't come discussing writing if you haven't had the incredibly obvious common sense to skip the badly animated 600 episodes filler-riddled monstrosity to read the tight and fast well drawn (and, believe it or not, well written) manga.

>>280872483
The filler's not what makes it an obvious kid's show. The manga's literally aimed at 10 year olds.

>>280869245 (OP)
It's literally fanfiction, this doesn't deserve a thread.

>>280869245 (OP)
It had potential, but the writing went to absolute shit after a decade, with the best example being the joke of the final tournament fight we just witnessed. Every character just acts like absolute retard now. I think Salagir just started to hate the fanbase after everyone rejected his OC waifu Bra.

>>280872532
>demographics
More midwittery
Being aimed at kids doesn't mean it has to be dumb

What the Toei writes in the anime is dumb, cartoonish, flanderized, exaggerated, overindulgent. What Toriyama writes is surprisingly down to Earth, tight and efficient (dialogues are pretty solid and the characters not knowing everything the narration knows is a really nice touch).

I don't know why I bother trying to explain things that should really be obvious at a glance. You could literally just pick an episode from Z, even one that doesn't have obvious filler and just adapts parts of an existing fight, and you'd see stupid shit. You'd see Toei adding retarded effects all over the place like jingling keys for kids as opposed to the manga being far more respectful of the reader's intelligence.

You'd also see how obviously bad the writing for a fanfiction like Multiverse is compared to even something bad like GT/Super/Daima or whatever because Multiverse barely registers as a story.

>>280871621
>>280872646
I still find it very funny that they made a character that is supposed to mock Mary Sue characters, but they didn't realise that their Bra is one of the most blatant Mary Sues in fanfiction.
Genuinely zero self-awareness, lmao.

>>280874518
To be fair Bra hadn't done all the shit she does later here, but yes, this is a prime example of retarded "webcomic" writer indulging in shitty tropes and being completely oblivious. Genuinely embarrassing.

>>280869245 (OP)
Absolute best fanfiction ever made. Unironically.

>>280875062
... because it's a shining example of what NOT to do as a writer. Legitimately some of the most stupid shit I've ever seen. It gets wrecked even by the shittiest parts of Super/GT.

>>280869245 (OP)
I gave up on this after I kept getting pounded in the face with error after error and then they just killed off Cell willy nilly after hyping him up for so long. I can look past them misunderstanding how Broly's power works I guess, I can look past the incessant Buuwank for whatever reason, but I cannot abide by them just casually wasting the actually interesting version of characters they made like with the Super Saiyans and with Perfect Cell. It doesn't even make sense that SS3 Vegeta can casually kill him after what we saw he could do. I've tried to read this series like 3 times now and there is always a point of stupidity that I have to drop it on, and Cell dying was the last straw for me

New Hope is the better fanfic

>>280875724
Based

Daipa is shit.

>>280869986
I was going to read this a while back till i found that out, no MC no read.

I would also like to state that nothing after frieza ever captured this level of majesty.
GT sucks, Cell sucks, Buu sucks and super REALLY sucks.

>>280879622
It's because this is the last time in canon that Goku EVER goes shirtless.

SUPER DUPER DIAPER
BIG MESSY SHARTS
*BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP*