Thread 22937066

how do i learn to write in different ways?
i think the way i write and how i build sentences is really recognizable, but even if i'm aware of it i still can't come up with alternatives
i guess a solution would be to feed it to an AI, but that's cumbersome and AI speech is ugly

>>22937066 (OP)
>i guess a solution would be to feed it to an AI, but that's cumbersome and AI speech is ugly
that's retarded
>i think the way i write and how i build sentences is really recognizable, but even if i'm aware of it i still can't come up with alternatives
well, if you think the way you write is recognizable, try breaking that down further
take a piece of your own writing, then figure out what seems recognizable about it, then break that down into more and more specific/detailed points
this will hopefully reveal patterns

>>22937078
i already know the main "pattern" i have, the thing is that i put commas to split concepts, in your case your commas are ok because you're making a list of things i should do, but i do this for everything
and this is not an ESL thing because i do the same in italian

>>22937185
i see
well, you could consciously avoid that pattern when writing
do you think that would be enough?

if not, you could look into creative writing & read some books, maybe try to write as if you're a character
sort of the way a comedian might practice impressions of a few different funny characters, you could try to write the way a few characters would until it becomes natural

i cant find the fucking image i'm looking for online
can't find anything anymore

>>22937066 (OP)
Read widely
encountering new ways of speaking opens you up, also, to new ways of constructing speech (and thinking)

>>22937880
yes

it works best to read things you enjoy or have interest in
people sometimes focus on reading as much as possible, it's a mistake

>>22937880
this