Can i get some feedback/ critique on this co?;

>>149229308 (OP)
Give her wrinkles and remove the stupid turtleneck

>>149229308 (OP)
really ugly, good job

>>149229308 (OP)
Looks like a female version of the clone wars emperor Palestine.

>>149229308 (OP)
The face is really unpleasant and doesn’t really fit the style of the rest of the design. Try exaggerating the profile.

>>149229308 (OP)
Maybe less lines in the corset and butt

>>149229308 (OP)
The posture doesn't look correct. She is tipped too far forward unless you're going to have her walking with a cane or a walker. The shoulders should be back a bit more and the hips should be further forward (more directly under her head). The legs should maybe be a little thicker as well especially from the front and back view.

>>149229308 (OP)
try to give her the retired star vibe, someone who already shined and now gracefully aged.

>>149229308 (OP)
How the hell is she standing cuz she just fall over, the gravity makes no sense or feed me to be bigger to support the weight also you have a lot of contradictory shapes, hips also don't work like that she looks like a T-Rex but with them tiny feet it makes no sense

>>149229308 (OP)
A woman who is that large is not going to have a thigh gap like that.

>>149229308 (OP)

>>149229515
Do you want a banana eat it down and go mmm

>>149229308 (OP)
Does she have buckteeth?

More cellulite please.

>>149229540
That looks better.

>>149229540
>>149229558
I tried this but I kinda prefer legs apart

>>149229308 (OP)
Feedback on what? What are you aiming for? Is she supposed to be evil/neutral/good, hot/meh/ugly in-universe, what age, what?

>>149229308 (OP)
Are you the same guy who drew the pig? >>>/ic/7623059

>>149229308 (OP)
God damn, post more. French Renaissance second demons are a weakness of mine.

>>149230631
Yep

>>149229308 (OP)
Yes, I want to fuck her.

>>149229308 (OP)
Reminds me of the game where you play a female looking puppet with dark souls gameplay. Yes I want to fuck that puppet too. Put a mole on her cheek as well as her tits.

>>149231978
Female puppet? Unless it was a different game but I remember The Gunstringer having a brothel character.

>>149229308 (OP)
I like it in a vacuum, though like >>149229656 said, it'd be best to tell us what angle you're going for to help determine if it achieves that.

>>149232756
This is an updated version, really I’m looking for any and all reactions, just what kind of reaction the character gets

>>149233666
My impression is a well past her prime, but still attractive woman. Maybe a madam, maybe a teacher at some finishing school, maybe a noble lady. The cleavage can be both lewd and just fashionable at the time depending on country and period (although definitely madam if she's supposed to be black, as she obviously can't be a noble or teacher in that case). Probably a supporting character.

im excited to see what this anon is making. hes been posting character designs for a while and i want to see what hes doing with them

>>149233666
Make her white with white hair

>>149234010
50% says it's porn.
50% says it's a pitch for Nickelodeon that's porn..

>>149233666
Add a white streak in her hair.

>>149234643
Maybe

>>149233666
Satan is trying to brainwash us into looking at brown hags.

>>149229308 (OP)
This is vile as fuck, I'm sure retarded cartoon fags will love it

I laid stool in my shitter more worthy of praise than this

>>149235640
Hot

>>149229308 (OP)
She stands like she’s got shit in her ass

>>149236002
she has Trump posture

>>149235615
>Another thread where someone calls out "cartoon fags" for a mild thing

>>149233666
Why is she black?

>>149229308 (OP)
Lips too much.

>>149233666
Okay, but it's hard to react to a character I know literally nothing about. How about show her in scenarios you're interested in putting her? Like, show us the character for this design.

>>149236345
why not?

>>149235615
You do realize that since OP hasn't clarified what he's gonna use these characters for these could all be webcomic stuff right? Then that'd make you the fag.

>>149229308 (OP)
Plappable.