Thread 150278989

THE PITCH! Mary Jane Watson just killed a man, because of a letter from the IRS that shouldn't exist. What the audit uncovered was a life erased, a marriage taken, a child no one remembers but her. Now she's fighting to prove she's not insane, just grieving what was lost.

>>150278989 (OP)
Hello, Spider-Man fans! Someone started posting this...

Just got back into the Spider-Man universe after a very long time and was completely heartbroken. So, I decided to write something and wanted to share this fan fiction script series.

I've taken some liberties with continuity but I've tried to stay on track generally, and I do introduce some retcons. This takes place Now-ish in the ANV and ASM timeline, But like I said, liberties were taken.

For example, Paladin Holdings, a mysterios corporation and Standard Academy, a boarding school in NYC. Also, I'm not following Marvels Timescaling.

Any feed back you have is of course welcome as I am not at all experienced with writing in general. But really, this is meant for your entertainment and delight. as you are fans of Mary Jane and Peter.

FULL DISCLOSURE. I passed these scenes through Claude AI to check for any plagarism, help with AO3 HTML formating, and general comment. there are pop culture references scattered through out, I'm not sure if it is common to footnote those in AO3? I'm new to AO3 as well.

THANK YOU FOR YOU CONSIDERATION

Contains Violence and Mild Sexual Content

>>150278989 (OP)

AlphaSierraToad is my AO3 name. can't post AO3 link without getting blocked for Spam

EPISODE SYNOPSIS: "SPIDER-MAN: THE TAXMAN COMETH"

EPISODE 1: "THE INTERROGATION" - An actress's claim of self-defense unravels when she bleeds impossible memories.

EPISODE 2: "THE LETTER" - An IRS audit reveals a marriage she can't remember; Mary Jane discovers she has not been living Mary Jane's life.

EPISODE 3: "PICKLED EVERYTHING" - An awkward reunion, a sandwich, a walk down a hallway and up four flights of stairs.

EPISODE 4: "MNEMONIC PROGOGNITIVE DISONANCE" - Joint tax returns reveal a life lived together, memories of the future haunt the present.

EPISODE 5: "THE PHOTO" - A childhood home bears devastating proof of something sacred erased.

EPISODE 6: "PALADIN" - Spider-Man unleashes an eldritch creature; the nightmarish being is connected to Mary Jane's past.

EPISODE 7: "THE DEVIL'S TRILL" - Mary Jane confronts Paul.

EPISODE 8: "THE BOOK OF REVELATION: DETAILS" - Media firestorm erupts after the Devil reveals the details.

EPISODE 9: "THE BOOK OF REVELATION: DARK CITY" - Peter discovers he's been meeting someone who should be dead; a truth hidden for thirteen months.

EPISODE 10: "MADONNA IN RUINS" - Love is reclaimed in the ruins; a familiar voice from Peter's past arrives with news that changes everything.

>>150279139
Delete the . After archiveofourown in the link

https://archiveofourownorg/works/69343046/chapters/179793166

thank you friend

>>150279411
When are you uploading more because that ending on ch10 has me climbing walls

Are Ben and Kaine still alive?

Overall I like some of the changes you made to lore to make things fit

>>150279562
Thank you for your words. i'm so thrilled atleast one person enjoyed it. Hopefully uploading a few more chapters by the end of the month. Had to take a breather. It was a learning process for me

As far as Ben and Kaine? I'll be exploring that. Peter has alot to process and the clock is ticking.

this is the right kind of autism. Pretty easy to clear the bar compared to what Marvel is doing but I'm impressed with the level of thought put into it.

I'm down for anything with Peter and MJ as a team. They're so great together

>>150280863
I was thinking of getting into writing fanfics because wow is ASM shit but I get this overwhelming feeling of cringe opening office and close the window.

>>150278989 (OP)
Kill yourself.

>>150282483

thanks for the feedback bud.

https://archiveofourownorg/works/69343046/chapters/179793166

and dont forget the .org

>fanfic
>AIslop
no

>>150282959
It wasn't written by Ai, read the Disclosure

>>150278989 (OP)
GOOD MORNING SIR

>>150283431
Good Morning.