tell me if you like it even if is not done yet, also it is in spanish but don't mind that

>>459748 (OP)
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–This huge block of black should be rich black, not 100K. Add 20M and 20C. Or call your printer to know how they config "rich black" or "negro compuesto";

– This is not an EAN-13. You can have this barcode effect, but make it an EAN-13;


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–Yellow in Graphika has a bit of cyan that is making it both look like shit and will cause huge problems with printing (also applies to back);

– The + is so fucking close to being justifies while not being justified it makes me really uncomfortable;

– The connected holes in LOS and QUE are a distraction. Here we call it "rat paths";

– "Edición especial" that has nothing special on it. I mean, just now I noticed it is a special edition and it is the 6th bullet point;

–The balls are shy and simply on top. Be bolder with them. Make them bigger. Make them go sometimes over, sometimes under, etc;

–The arms' shadows are not in overprint/darken/multiply;

– Always overprint black text over colored backgrounds (that applies for the Los diseñadores yadda yadda).

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Overall it is good, implying you are learning. But it lacks hierarchy, boldness and courage. Use this time to experiment a lot.

thank you for your advice, I'll take it into account to finish this work
i forgot to mention this is a work for my college, so im learning how to design but this really helps