>>40149366 (OP)
roses are blue
violets are red
i think i'm a woman
cuz i'm fucked in the head

>>40149366 (OP)
Yes. I await your vocaroo poem recital.

>>40149366 (OP)
sure nona :]

my poe/tttt/ry threads kept dying so I stopped doing them but drop it hon

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>>40149388
As you wish.

Trigger warning: if u know me irl (im office autist) dont read cuz my cynicism is toxic to the state of the mentally well.

Poem name:

Fading whispers
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I no longer remember how your lips felt on mine, the smell of your hair, or even your voice. Blyatt..They are but distant echos. I wonder how distant can one grow, the maximum distance must be death. But how many times must I die to finally be dead?
Its sad to think about, that everything cherished is seemingly smoke that cannot be truly grasped-even if i grasp myself by the time I let go im already someone else.
Perhaps that is the ultimate nature of man, to cling on to light whilst being made of dark, animals that were allowed to taste the nectar of heaven but were never able to comprehend it.
*drinks vodka*
Who we both were in that moment in time was equivalent to a shooting star. The star burns out, dust remains, memories and love are both destined to die.
One way or the other, all these things we treasure will return to the primordial soup.
In the next life perhaps we will marry the people who hurt us the most in this one, saints will be tortured and devils rewarded, if that be so then perhaps we've already reborn.

Esche hvatit! Dobrey nochi....

>>40149540
it's not bad but... isn't it just prose? where's the meter? maybe i'm missing it

>>40149566
Yea basically, its stalker 1979 style inspired prose.
I have poems too but they're much harder

>>40149540
ladden with oedipal subtext as always

>>40150079
Freud is a hack.
Read Carl jung

>>40150152
noooooo OP you ruined it by being a fucking jungian. can you not see the irony of your jungian shadow's inability to reconcile itself with freud?

>>40150152
>Freud sux read regressive Freud
Funny. I'm still readin Lacan. It's slow going but I got through the first 6 seminars and just started the famous 7th seminar on ethics. It's already starting out good with the Das Ding metaphor.

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>>40150190
You obviously dont understand.


You need to read Carl Jung and understand that almost everything he has said is true. He is a genius.


Freud is a hack.


And you dont seem to understand, a shame i thought you were an honest m..an..

>>40150190
there is something quite shifty and socratic about this lacan. anyone who is doused in sour milk, and is more concerned with what his followers think of him, than slapping the little bitch who did it, can't be an honest person

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>>40150233
I like socratic. It works for me.

>>40150270
i was just making a joke about this:
https://youtu.be/6aqGYYBwKbQ?si=HKQYtf9HuRz2yMIj

my girl sheds a tear
I'm quick to wipe her
my girl poops herself
I'm changing her diaper

>>40150630
brought a tear to my eye, true pottery