Tranner goes to doctor. Says she's depressed and lonely. Says she needs to be boyremoved. Doctor says, "Treatment is simple. Big strong man is in town. Go and see him, he will boyremove you." Tranner bursts into tears. "But doctor..."
>>40577980 (OP)He replies, "Yes. I am Butt Doctor. Doctor Gluteus Maximus to be exact."
>>40577980 (OP)Should I continue this VN I'm at the part where he fought the invisible monkey mech and crashed I like the prose but it kind of feels like things just happen
>>40578049Yeah absolutely continue it I love it. The next chapter onwards gives you a much better picture of why things are happening and what everything means for the setting. I think there's just so much exposition they couldn't fit it in any earlier.
this legitimately made me lol, thank you op
>>40577980 (OP)Fuck off negromasa
>>40578049The writing's pretty garbage and preachy.