>>24467833>>24467837Yeah probably, that's just meant to be the setup for one of our main characters, and to give him reason to start the plot. I didn't want him to be super obvious with his hopelessness, but for him to be a suckup to the system, like Syril Karn from Andor (picrels before I had his character fully written out)
I did an opening chapter for it at the start of the year, but I didn't like my art, so I've just spent alot of time practicing my art and writing short stories, and Im now 15 pages into a more medium sized comic.
Posted the scene on IC a bit ago, although its pretty embarrassing looking back, at least I can use it to measure my progress though
https://warosu.org/ic/thread/7495115
So ill probably get back to picrel, in a few years once I've finished my other comic, so it should have better writing and art, and I'll try to make it more subtle and hopefully feel more real too.