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What do you consider to be "good dialogue" in fiction?
It makes me feel visceral emotion or makes me go "damn I wish I could've written that".
>>24471997Is every piece of dialogue supposed to evoke those feelings?
>>24471987 (OP)It should never be obvious what is being said
>>24472025Yeah every single line in the entire novel
>>24471987 (OP)>avails itself of elision, contractions, and on the whole terse and parsimonious or>expresses ideal speech & discourse without it sounding like the author's exposition puppetryMostly the absence of quotation marks - in addition to removing eyesores - is a good indicator. HE SAID SHE SAID shouldn't be necessary, and ought to be strategically deployed if at all.
>>24471987 (OP)When it feels real. Or furthers the story.
1. an antinomy occurs as an infinite quantity tends toward an affirmation or negation
2. paralogism is the modulation of this operation with regard to the subject