Thread 24471987 - /lit/ [Archived: 992 hours ago]

Anonymous
6/16/2025, 10:36:29 PM No.24471987
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What do you consider to be "good dialogue" in fiction?
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Anonymous
6/16/2025, 10:37:06 PM No.24471988
>>24471987 (OP)
If it's written by me
Otherwise it's shit
Anonymous
6/16/2025, 10:40:59 PM No.24471997
It makes me feel visceral emotion or makes me go "damn I wish I could've written that".
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Anonymous
6/16/2025, 10:51:47 PM No.24472025
>>24471997
Is every piece of dialogue supposed to evoke those feelings?
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Anonymous
6/16/2025, 10:54:22 PM No.24472030
>>24471987 (OP)
It should never be obvious what is being said
Anonymous
6/16/2025, 10:57:03 PM No.24472035
>>24472025
Yeah every single line in the entire novel
Anonymous
6/17/2025, 8:08:40 AM No.24473136
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>>24471987 (OP)
Anonymous
6/17/2025, 8:18:47 AM No.24473158
>>24471987 (OP)
>avails itself of elision, contractions, and on the whole terse and parsimonious or
>expresses ideal speech & discourse without it sounding like the author's exposition puppetry

Mostly the absence of quotation marks - in addition to removing eyesores - is a good indicator. HE SAID SHE SAID shouldn't be necessary, and ought to be strategically deployed if at all.
Anonymous
6/17/2025, 7:11:10 PM No.24474100
>>24471987 (OP)
When it feels real. Or furthers the story.
Anonymous
6/18/2025, 2:32:21 AM No.24475126
1. an antinomy occurs as an infinite quantity tends toward an affirmation or negation
2. paralogism is the modulation of this operation with regard to the subject