Tried to read the first couple of the top 10 web novels on various web novel signs and they were abysmal. Absolutely awful. Yet they had millions of readers. That's why I've figured I'd give writing fantasy slop a try. I know the text is likely pretty trashy but I'm looking for any feedback that can help. Thank you very much

>>24491298 (OP)
Read mine, it's KINO!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/119783/fff-class-unlucky-antagonist-villains-origin-story

>>24491298 (OP)
>>24492039
Go back to your containment general, spergs

>>24493071
you bumped a 12 hour old thread that was on its way to archiving to say that
you didn't even sage
r u retarded