Hello all. I wrote this and in hoping to get some feedback if possible.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/67261513

what made you decide to write that?

>>24530086 (OP)
I'm only up to the summary and already
>a short story centering a
Don't try to get fancy with word choice when you don't know how to use words properly. There's nothing wrong with:
>a short story about a

I stopped here
>“I'm working on it, but working 12 hours a day all but Sunday don’t exactly leave one much time for meeting men,” I said, making excuses and obfuscating, an art which at this point I'd surely mastered.
Explaining the subtext of dialogue like this comes off as a symptom of inexperience. You've got a long way to go. Keep reading books.

>>24530086 (OP)
>plural subject
>the verb "to be" is conjugated as "is"
GET YE BACK TO WHATEVER ESL HELL YE CRAWLED FORTH FROM

Is this painting real? And by real I mean, real in the context it is embodying, implying it was made at the time it implies it was made

Okay I gave it a read, it's not that bad, you can improve in some areas that im sure some anons here can expand on though.

>>24530319
It's AI slop, anon.

>>24530352
Thank you. I couldn't tell, they've really fixed up the fingers problem. I tried to notice anything off but i couldnt

>>24530357
All I can see that's slightly off is the pattern on the drapery in the background. Not sure how I could tell it was AI slop at a glance.

>>24530366
nta but you can also tell by the dimensions. A low dimension image having very high quality is unlikely.

>>24530313
I live in America, wtf are you talking about

>>24530100
My girlfriend, who I love.

>>24530817
living in america and being esl arent mutually exclusive