Intended to be a genre-specific \general\, namely for erotica. You can call erotic writing many things (literary prostitute among them), but at the end of the day, its a product. Its also a different animal, as compared to writing in other genres.
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I formally intend this general, for the discussion of anything that pertains to reading or writing, well... smut. Some writers, obviously, are better at it than others.
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Anyone that ever read any smut, anyone that ever wrote a single paragraph of smut before, is welcome!

in a sort of opening splash? I'm prepared to provide a link, to an erotic writing sample. Its nothing that didn't exist already, its from an older writing project. It was intended, to be... over the top.
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If you view the heavy sexuality theme(s) like violence, IE, something to provide cheap interest. It quickly reduces whatever "sexy component" once existed (for the author), because it becomes tedious drudge work. It is what it is, heavy sexual content.
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this sample fetish erotica text? If you view it as I said, like violence. Then, this is one of the biggest climax (pun not intended, but there it is) points to the sexuality. There are others, believe me. It comes from a several hundred page erotic work.
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NOTE: all criticisms are legitimate. Except? The "ly" rule. This was from a period a couple years back, before I had learned the "ly" editing rule. So, until this older work gets a new star to finish editing pass, the "ly" waits to get fixed.

>>24542324
https://moonquillnovels.com/book/portraits-in-perversion

>>24542327
Hey. If nothing else? Its *free* smut, 7k words of it. Enjoy, no fee.
On the other hand, I'm prepared to "defend" my pre-writing marketing strategy I had in mind, when I began then completed this large erotic project.

>>24542334
Can you give a quick preview of the story?

>>24542310 (OP)
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>>24542341
Ban wymin.

>>24542341
>Can you give a quick preview of the story?
the excerpt, or the larger work in general. I assume both. In basic? A woman meets a former MP at college. He's 4 years older then her. They begin a (very) explicit S&M themed romance. Femdom. Here, in this excerpt though. She decides she wants it rough for a change. Things go awry.
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I'm curious if my prose is at all equal to the barrier for entry to this literary genre.

>>24542310 (OP)
>smut
Begone foul femoid, you can’t even tilt your /slashes/ the right way.

A masochistic junior high school girl who can't help but want to have sex with a futanari dick calls out to a bad futanari older sister and pleasurably appeals to her to give up her human rights and have sex with her. https://novel18.syosetu.com/n0581ig/

A story about a mother-complex girl who wants to sexually destroy her mother and ends up growing a futanari penis https://novel18.syosetu.com/n8842hq/

The Fox's Wedding ~Or, the Beautiful Demon Slayer, Kogasaki Amairo, Fallen by a Futanari Dick~ https://syosetu.org/novel/236159/

>>24542602
>Begone foul femoid, you can’t even tilt your /slashes/ the right way.
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tilt my slashes any direction i want, nigger.
besides, there's no women on the internet.

>>24543336
So this is the summary >>24542533
Thanks anon. Though I'm not much interest into the "female domination" idea. But more on the "hardened man falling for a woman in tragic circumstances", she being an impossible love.

>>24542665
are these erotica things you wrote, or read.

There's enough boards for gooners

>>24543354
>Thanks anon. Though I'm not much interest into the "female domination" idea.
I had to pick out a fetish, to write x-rated erotica. I simply chose femdom. Reason? It enjoys enough popularity, plus it gets what i call "counter-culture" points.

>But more on the "hardened man falling for a woman in tragic circumstances", she being an impossible love.
The woman with the tragedy, is his girlfriend's best friend. They both help her, she's the one with issues.
As you can see? *similar* issues, just a different flavor of spice added.

Does anyone here read japanese erotic writers? I have tried a few, from the ones that try more realisitc settings to the ones that are just hentai visual novels in book format, but nothing comes close to Hikaru Kira. The stories are mostly about beautiful and proud women getting psychologically cornered, raped and eventually fall into being masochistic slaves. Anyone have recomendations regardless of format or writer nationality?

As far as the process of writing erotica, I had to teach myself how to write it. With exercises. I had previously avoided the sexually explicit in anything I wrote; it came out funny. Once I was done with this big "erotica-centric" project? If nothing else, its now easy to drop in normal day-to-day sexual activity in other projects. I know I can put in as much or as little spice as I want now.

One thing I've learned, that its about blending genres, by percentages. Take an action/crime hard-boil. Its almost compulsory, to expect violence and sex. I select my "sex" content, on a sort of internal one to ten scale. My violence content, on another one to ten scale. The remaining on the one to ten not accounted for? Plot. Another example. A well rounded anything novel, requires some romance and /or sex. When the MC is male, and he just has a companion? That's boring. When he engages with his partner, and meaningful dialogue. That, is a slice of romance and/or sex. Gaining the ability to be comfortable with whatever percentage of sex and eroticism, is a necessary skill to writing.

Well, if nothing else. How is the art I selected for a rough draft, of "Erotica General". I believe the ability to write erotica, is an integral skill to the overall craft of writing. To me, completing a big erotica project, with erotics as a major component? Opened the door for me. I can now comfortably, add "10% hot sex" to an otherwise "lacking something" thin plot line.

>>24544464
Do you write with an specific demographic (gender) in mind? Me as a male, I'm always disappointed every time I try to read "erotic literature". It just can't compete with the hardcore porn I consume, through several media. What I want is the literary version of that visual porn, and literature doesn't seem to be on par. I wonder if women sees it differently, if they are more susceptible to subtle doses of sensuality though literature.

>>24544602
>Do you write with an specific demographic (gender) in mind? Me as a male, I'm always disappointed every time I try to read "erotic literature". It just can't compete with the hardcore porn I consume, through several media. What I want is the literary version of that visual porn, and literature doesn't seem to be on par. I wonder if women sees it differently, if they are more susceptible to subtle doses of sensuality though literature.
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I started out. I need to write a "penthouse letters" quality letter. That;s it. When I "lost it", I quit and restarted. When I had a certain length, I "had it" and was good from then on out,
Yes, I started out, as a anon watching porn clips. Thing was, that only gave me clinical description. I had to get "emotional connection" through dialog and other established meas.
Without the emotional connection, between the characters, IE why they are doing what they are doing.... it was pointless. There's a *lot* of emotional connection between the main characters in this story, you're just seeing the sex because that's the except.
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if you read this excerpt, and at all liked it? You might shit when you read the threesome text excerpt. I am, after all? The anon that was playing the "restructure the sentence game", and... everyone wanted to *use* my sentence I restructured. I look at it,like I'm making genre-slop... but, why shouldn't genre-sloppa have half decent writing, and a real plot.

>>24544602
>Me as a male, I'm always disappointed every time I try to read "erotic literature". It just can't compete with the hardcore porn I consume, through several media. What I want is the literary version of that visual porn, and literature doesn't seem to be on par
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the excerpt I posted, came from a book. I was lurking \lit\, and someone posted about some female writer had "hit the lottery". She wrote a little over 100 pages novella, fetish erotica. They noted, she had over 100,000 amazon downloads her first month.
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I decided, I had to try it. I went through the writing exercises I described, then the last one? Just turned into the first chapter. My criteria, at the outset:
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it will be explicit as hell.
it will contain long erotic passages, no flipping pages to get to the "good part".
I went "all in", and show their meeting and how their romantic life grows. I show their real life, outside of the fantasy role playing sex they engage in more and more of.
I originally intended it, to be simply what it appeared to be... an explicit and (hopefully) reasonably well written thing.
The girl's room mates were originally just window dressing, but they evolved.
starting into book two? you've been bombarded by explicit sex. You;re just sure you;re about to get more of that... when real plot sneaks up on you.
Dark, heavy, noir plot. Gritty.
book one? All sex and beginnings. Book two? The heavy plot gets in with the backed off but still prevalent sex scenes.
Book three? Even darker noir and grit.
I think if someone read one of my later "more accessible" later novels, there's 3 so far I think might make the cut. A reader might wonder where this unique character comes from, how they got made.
But, the first book in that trilogy? I was going for... surprisingly well written and takes itself seriously. By the time you're into 2 and 3, you see why.
But... the first book? Functions as a stand alone fetish erotica.
So, its unique. I was imagining, getting readers because of the red hot sex. overdosing them on the heavy sex until they're "caught", I guess. Then, they get to read the other 2 books, which become increasingly dark noir.
But the sex, particularly in book one? Front and center. If you're looking for "porn clips" explicit, that's you. Then as long as you;re getting your fix, why not keep enjoying the fix, while you "accidentally" get introduced to heavy noir and grit.

>>24544602
>Do you write with an specific demographic (gender) in mind?
I'm not sure. With female domination for sex games as the central core, are books about that written for men wanting that from seeing it in porn clips? Or, do women read them too. If I had to guess, I'm going to say it probably would appeal to male readers that are fans of femdom porn clips, I suppose. But I don't really know.

>>24542310 (OP)
I think it's distasteful to put images of scantily clad women on the covers of these books. If I wanted to be aroused by images I wouldn't be reading.