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Anonymous
7/14/2025, 1:07:34 PM No.24548971
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I want to write a book for middle aged women to get lots of shekels.
It doesn't matter if it is good quality, it should just attract lots of old women as customers. I will use AI.

This is what i currently have:

Protagonist:
>Becky is a minimal wage secretary living with her 2 children alone, divorced and is in the her 30s in London.

1st book
>evil is a bit evil (like wanting to kill some animals or so)
>Becky stops him by pure emotional power, evil sees the light and stops being evil (but isn't good yet)
>Cliffhanger: hint on romantic tensions (in the sense of: "looking deep into each others eyes and grasping for air and feeling warm")
2nd book
>filler material, "character development"
>absolutely nothing tangible happens
>evil struggles in his attempt to become better, Becky helps, LOTS of platonic love
>if its too boring, they solve some little issue, like some child that was looking for its mommy
>Cliffhanger: Ex or some other dude shows up, who is still interested in becky
3rd book
>love triangle
>evil-now-good is simping even harder for Becky
>love triangle gets paused or resolved swiftly
>there is never really any doubt, the other guy has no change against evil-now-good, bad guy wins Becky
>maybe the other guy turns into a simp who approves of evil-now-good and Beckys relationship
>it also gets revealed that the larger evil exists, through some coincidence that makes evil-now-good confess it to Becky
4th book (and maybe more, you can expand that indefinitely)
>Becky and evil-now-good fights against greater evil
>Greater evil loses
>Greater evil sees the light on the deathbed, thanks to Beckys emotional power
>Greater evil wishes Becky and evil-now-good well and dies

Reminder that i don't need specifics, i just let AI write those. But i do need an overall theme for a prompt.
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Anonymous
7/14/2025, 1:11:16 PM No.24548974
>>24548971 (OP)
make it like Narnia, but the main protagonist who is the "chosen one" is middle-aged single mother.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cDY5_Yw7NqY
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Anonymous
7/14/2025, 1:12:37 PM No.24548977
>>24548971 (OP)
are you stupid, market is full of Ai slop it's not gonna be anything more than another ai dump on Kindle store. No publisher is stupid enough to publish Ai slop and most of your target audience are obsessed with rape,abuse, bdsm and other so called intense emotions . Don't be a fraud pajeet and try writting something which you can express, you have better chance scamming old woman than earning shakels for your shitty Ai slop
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Anonymous
7/14/2025, 1:12:43 PM No.24548978
>becky
Anonymous
7/14/2025, 1:15:58 PM No.24548984
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>>24548974
idk, i don't think that this would sell, not enough romance
Anonymous
7/14/2025, 1:19:12 PM No.24548990
>>24548977
>and most of your target audience are obsessed with rape,abuse, bdsm and other so called intense emotions
that's alright, i can add that
Anonymous
7/14/2025, 2:54:21 PM No.24549131
>>24548971 (OP)
>>Becky is a minimal wage secretary living with her 2 children alone, divorced and is in the her 30s in London.
this is slightly too on the nose and relatable desu. middle aged women want to read about slightly younger women than themselves with slightly better lives than they believe they have. Divorced would be fine but ditch the two kids. Getting pregnant will be an ending plot point for the live triangle so you want to keep your powder dry in this department
>1st book
you're already doing this wrong. take a step back and think about the audience here, most women who read this sort of slop aren't unsatisfied with their husbands because they never liked him, but because he's gotten older and boring. they miss the man they married 10 or 15 or w.e years ago who was young and fit and fun. our protagonist is divorced, but this is more than just set dressing, it's a plot point in and of itself. why did she divorce her ex? the answer is that he's one of those men and she got bored of him. BUT, crucially, this means he can become interesting again. she still loved him at one point and secretly loves him still, but now they're separated he's become interesting again because of the 'wake up call'

enter the love triangle:
>becky
>chad (evil)
>stan (ex husband)
becky has to spend 10 books fucking both of them to work out who she really wants to settle down with, etc.
Anonymous
7/14/2025, 11:52:26 PM No.24550240
>>24548971 (OP)
>>filler material, "character development"
my thoughts are? Why go for "filler". I read advice once, that said do little sub-plots that end up going nowhere, but seem like they could... and that was superior to filler. Bonus was that it adds seeming "plot complexity", and can keep a reader guessing.
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that's on filler. On character development? (which you equated to filer) That's not filler. That, is one of the things that can elevate your work from ho hum, to something more than the sum of its parts.
Anonymous
7/14/2025, 11:57:05 PM No.24550250
>>24548971 (OP)
Write a book about some chick that has magical powers and falls in love with some strange dude that is immortal or something. Women devour that shit.