Anonymous
7/19/2025, 1:44:57 AM No.24562561
i can recognize it's an important and ornate book but reading it just makes my head spin. it's impenetrable. the norton critical footnotes make things worse, knocking the wind out of any little engagement i am able to get rolling.
the narration is out in front of everything that happens, it's written in mr krabs voice. any time something happens it's buried in a long biblically-laced rant about nothing-in-particular and is followed by a 5-20 chapter break to describe archaic technical whaling diagrams and taxonomies. extremely complicated and tiresome sentence structure. everything that happens, all the characters feel so distant and abstract for how many words are spent on them.
i cannot be assed to spend the mental cycles decoding most of this. in isolation pieces of it are beautiful and interesting but taken altogether its a homogenous slog. i feel like i am fighting the book. 25 chapters left. come shit on me in the replies and tell me what a redditor i am, how stupid i am, and how annoying my writing is
the narration is out in front of everything that happens, it's written in mr krabs voice. any time something happens it's buried in a long biblically-laced rant about nothing-in-particular and is followed by a 5-20 chapter break to describe archaic technical whaling diagrams and taxonomies. extremely complicated and tiresome sentence structure. everything that happens, all the characters feel so distant and abstract for how many words are spent on them.
i cannot be assed to spend the mental cycles decoding most of this. in isolation pieces of it are beautiful and interesting but taken altogether its a homogenous slog. i feel like i am fighting the book. 25 chapters left. come shit on me in the replies and tell me what a redditor i am, how stupid i am, and how annoying my writing is
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