Hi, my name is Olivia. I am currently writing a dark erotica that features a rich, manipulative step-mother who tortures and humiliates her step-daughter at every opportunity she gets. I seem to have hit a creative road block and would love to hear some of your most twisted and depraved humiliation or torture ideas. It could be literally anything. For example, one of the scenes I have planned involves the step-mother inviting her friends over so they can all take turns abusing her step-daughter and recording it. The more twisted and unique the better.

>>24568307 (OP)
Ask /d/

>>24568307 (OP)
>so they can all take turns abusing her step-daughter and recording it
Why are you going full gonzo like that? In a "book" or literary format you're supposed to guide the reader through a build up to that moment, wich could be the very end of the story even.
One of the "punishments" could be, to take step-daughter to the garden and tell her to dig a hole for her, mafia style. So the evil step mother make her step down in the whole with just her head out, and leave her there, under the sun or the rain. Then maybe the mother ask the young hot gardener to dig her out and clean her, as another taunting cruel play... just to prepare her for another punishment and so on.
That's how you catch the reader, with bread crumbs into the rabbit hole.

women....

Have the stepmother cheat on her husband while he's away and gets creampied by black men. Then have her stepdaughter lap up the cum out of her pussy afterwards while she lays on her back on the bed holding her
knees (like a happy baby yoga pose)

>>24568307 (OP)
Have a male friend character throughout the opening of the book, he obviously wants her, but she sees him as just a good friend. In the scene the step mother has her tied up and blind folded in a kind of sex swing, shes expecting the step mother to start touching her etc but instead she reveals that she has arranged for someone else to use her, the step mother then leaves to watch on a camera.

We reveal to the reader that the step mother has taken her phone, posed as her then texted a sexually explicit photo to her male friend and arranged for him to come over and fuck her CNC style.

The friend then arrives and starts by quietly eating her pussy then begins fucking her blindfolded and gagged, quickly she realises it's her male friend by his voice which horrifies her, but her body responds more and more, confusing her, the gag preventing her from crying out to him. After a while he decides to take off her blindfold and gag but when she protests he thinks it's part of the CNC game, he's violent and forceful it's not until he's drained his balls does he actually listen to her cries. Maybe the step mother comes back in and does something else depraved.

Something like that. You gotta add in what would a girl finds repulsive for horror. Being passed around by a roomful of hot adonis body chads with big cocks isn't going to cut it for dark/horror erotica. This is also partly why girls/women watch so much real murder content.

>>24568307 (OP)
The stepmom makes her dress like a baby and drugs her heavily while she is outside, forcing her to be put in a stroller. She brings her to school this way.
The stepmom gives her brain damage and she is tearfully aware of the intelligence she’ll never get back
The stepmom destroys her body with greasy and fattening foods, ruining her self esteem

If you want actual torture, and I doubt you do, the stepmom loads up her body with parasites such as tapeworms and other things
The stepmom forces FtM gender bottom surgery on her
Yadda yadda. The destruction of innocence

Figure out what kind of abuse you want. Is it to degrade the step-daughter, or is it to empower the step-mother? For example, if the step-mother wants to feel empowered over the step-daughter, it might be forms of bullying like forcing her to say or do embarrassing things using group psychology of the friends to get involved making the bad mom the social boss of the group. If the goal is to maliciously degrade the daughter for some reason (jealousy, revenge, etc) it would be things like forcing her to eat spoiled food, forcing her to stand for hours infront of the friends (ie, only enough seating for the friends and touching the wall is strictly forbidden), making the friends take turns “suggesting” which clothing items she should take off and laughing at her.

>>24568307 (OP)
>Hi, my name is Olivia.
not it's not
>features a rich
predictable and trite
>step-mother
also predictable but could work
> your most twisted and depraved humiliation or torture ideas.
do you mean physical torture? if so, what does humiliation matter if you are literally being physically tortured?
>they take turns abusing her step-daughter and recording it
abuse is a very general term, be specific or people can;'t reply in kind

>>24568307 (OP)
you shouldn't ask /lit/. You should ask soldiers who served in the middle east. They come across bodies that were tortured so horribly you wouldn't believe it if they told you.

>>24568307 (OP)
Make it a step-son and I'll read this slop

>>24568307 (OP)
What's the movie on pic rel, lil bro? And I dunno, sadistic domination shit is the best, like her mama pissing in her mouth and her crying in total submission, you know the drill.

>>24568485
>What's the movie on pic rel
Click on blue arrow, image search.
>mama pissing in her mouth and her crying in total submission
No, she makes her step daughter piss in a glass, and calls one of her hot friends (step daughter's secret crush) to dinner and makes him to drink the step daughter's piss from that glass, in front of her.
And then the step mother tells him:
>Did you like the apple-juice?, my beautiful daughter here, made it herself hu-hu-hu...

>>24568307 (OP)
Include a part where the stepmother seems feel sorry about what she's done. Even to the point of allowing her the girl to make a few friends who are allowed to come over and play. Have the stepmother watch them secretly for a while until eventually there is a falling out with one of them and then have the stepmother invite her back over to abuse all of them as payback.

>>24568307 (OP)
What about turning her friends and schoolmates. Maybe she can secretly contact some poor kids to start bullying her or try to peer pressure her inot doing drugs. Then she can "catch" her in the act and punish her. Long-term drugging could be a thing. There was a reddit post once about a woman who felt ill, but could never diagnose the reason why until she realised boyfriend was secretly feeding her slugs, maybe something insane like that.

For the coomer elements write it as a slow escalation. Have her start taking pictures to "pose" for clothing she will sell off to punish her for doing drugs. Her step mother could then force her to waer hand me down clothing that is erotic to embarass her at school. You could use the group sexual abuse as an initiation event for using her body as a bargaining chip. A vacation could just be her going to some resort to get used by rich associates of her stepmother.
>>24568521
Okay, but wouldn't the guy realise that it isn't apple juice after the first sip?

>>24568588
>Okay, but wouldn't the guy realise that it isn't apple juice after the first sip?
Of course the stepmother would cover the flavor with something else, sugar, or maybe mixing it with actual apple juice. The thing is to play with the step daughter's mind. Next she will ask the guy to stay the night, for other nasty games she has in plan. I have some ideas about that.

>>24568485
>What's the movie on pic rel, lil bro?
Looks like it's just porn

>>24568366
get help

>>24568307 (OP)

Hi femanon, did at any point in your life, you ever have a penis? If not, we should fall in love.

>>24568307 (OP)
>The more twisted and unique the better.
One woman treats another woman as if she and the other woman are both human beings.

>>24569022
He wants a BDSM story, not science-fiction.

>>24569043
Forced non-rape / non-abjection is BDSM for women.

The most evil thing the stepmother could ever do to her stepdaughter would be to arrange a date for her with a man who is ... only 5'8. That's it. Nothing sexual, quite the opposite in fact. Just having to spend time with a manlet. There's literally nothing more disgusting and humiliating from a woman's point of view.

>>24569113
5'8 is not a manlet. 5'6 is.

>>24568307 (OP)
As an ENF fetishist I might have too many ideas.
Make the mother strip the daughter naked and lock her out of the house.
Filming and posting online always adds to the humiliation.
Add a romantic partner that understands her and that is the only person she feels comfortable around, just to create a false sense of security before her stepmother ruins it all by degrading and humiliating her in front of him.

>>24568307 (OP)
For some reasons, I imagined the step-mother as a "tiger-mom" and the daughter as a wimpy kid.
This story type has probably been done to death already.

>>24569142
>t. 5'8"

>>24568307 (OP)
>Hi, my name is Olivia
YWNBAW

>>24568405
Combining the hardcore scenes with plot progress is what make these books work.

>>24569310
5’8” is on the bottom rung of average. Also, if he’s rich she won’t care in the slightest.

>>24568307 (OP)
Make the step mother like a fucked up Brian Johnson type psycho (the guy trying to live forever, aka Moon Brah), draining the step daughter of blood for vampire facial treatments or for infusions, organ/partial organ transplants, using her as a labrat for Grey market research chemicals, shave her hair off to make her a wig etc in her quest for eternal youth. Use her sexually as a stress relief dungeon playtoy (strictly to reduce cortisol etc)

Obviously this ages and saps at the vitality of the step daughter. Eventually they switch places in biological age, when the step daughter is no longer useful, the step mother kills and eats her, serving up her prepared carcass as a dinner for a much younger man she starts courting, utilizing her newfound youth.

Or something.

>>24569505
*Bryan Johnson. The "don't die" guy.

The stepmother makes the daughter marry a respectable young man and be a trad wife and mother. Imagine the horror!

>>24568307 (OP)
>Hi, my name is Olivia
Listen here little baby. You're gonna get a lot of hurtful and degrading comments, but that ain't what I'm about. Let me just say, you are perfect the way you are. You hear me sugar? PERFECT. Don't ever change. You deserve anything and everything you want. Stay safe for me, baby girl.
>mfw thinking of you hurting

>>24569505

>>24568307 (OP)
Go away from climax and focus on little details which prepare the climax. Have the sub kneel or assume stress positions as a punishment or as an end in itself, then have her notice that this places her face near enough to the domme's crotch that she now cannot avoid smelling, then reveal that this is being done programmatically to immure her.
Have the domme deliberately order impossible tasks so the sub feels like she's failing all the time.

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