Thread 24707854

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Anonymous 9/8/2025, 9:30:32 AM No.24707854 [Report] >>24708589 >>24708775

Hullo lit could someone review this screen treatment: https://files.catbox.moe/icyk5e.pdf

Be as detailed or concise as you like, I just want to know if I have a general tone right for this. If any sentences etc feel awkward you can tell that too

Anonymous 9/8/2025, 11:01:59 AM No.24707984 [Report] >>24707988

>bump
pls

Anonymous 9/8/2025, 11:04:39 AM No.24707988 [Report] >>24708008

>>24707984
I'm about to go to bed, if it's still on the board when I wake up I'll give it a look.

Anonymous 9/8/2025, 11:27:41 AM No.24708008 [Report] >>24708513

>>24707988
Okay, never mind, I just read it anyway. I liked it, OP, it was fun. Sounds like a slow-burn horror movie. I've never read Henry James' story but this seems like it could be a good movie.

Anonymous 9/8/2025, 4:37:24 PM No.24708513 [Report]

>>24708008
thank you very much

Anonymous 9/8/2025, 5:18:36 PM No.24708589 [Report]

>>24707854 (OP)
It's not bad for an AI generated thing. Maybe introduce some weird monsters.

Anonymous 9/8/2025, 6:35:01 PM No.24708775 [Report]

>>24707854 (OP)
>https://files.catbox.moe/icyk5e.pdf
I like catbox
otherwise
stick to short stories
and work on flow
the language is a bit choppy