Absolutely fascinating.

Women writing men's behavior and inner monologue is so telling about female psychology. Look at what details they specifically mention and highlight. The first bit where Zade out-alphas some random bozo is just silly. Is this really how women imagine men (Chads) act and think when fantasizing about them?

>>81769397 (OP)
That writing is schizophrenic

>>81769397 (OP)
This is why I only read gay fanfiction written by 14 year olds for free (male btw)

>>81769397 (OP)
She might genuinely be retarded, nobody could have possibly written this with a functioning brain.
I just don't see how anyone can believe in someone switching from some caricature of a bdsm dom to a white knight orbiter to a monkey that's been edging for 3 weeks straight in one page.
It's also quite something that the books rating is 3.9 on goodreads, but all the reviews shit on it with 1 star. Public portrayal and their actual opinion about it don't align yet again.

>>81770703

That's how it is with a lot of femslop romance. Half rate it 5 stars, the other half, 1 or 2 stars.

>>81769397 (OP)
american psycho (the movie especially) is actually very interesting if youre looking for more, probably better-written examples of this type of thing
the book was written by a gay man but the screenplay was adapted and directed by women, so batemans perspective and internal monologue are extremely female-tinted even when not intended to be

>>81770871
don't forget how the lead writer of the movie is literally one of the threesome prostitutes that he kills

>>81770981
Based Quinton Tarantino feet sucking director moment

>all those times Chad bullied me Stacy was dripping wet
haunting

>>81769397 (OP)
Looks a lot like it was written by or with AI.

>>81771010

hehe, yeah, at least women have respect for the men in their family and wouldn't do that to them, right?

It's a lot better than women titting downstairs.