Anonymous
9/7/2025, 12:58:25 PM
No.150251852
>>150238082
>has heavily stylized humans with thick lineart but doesn't play into the strengths of that, instead animating everyone really smooth and slow.
>overall edited like his videos, leading to a admittedly rough watching experience
>very lil visual distinction between humans and their IRLs, also most or the humans are ugly as sin
>large spaces of deadair where nothing entertaining happens
>every action scene besides the last one is boring
>bianca weighs the whole story down by being deadweight
>pan voices just about every male
>largely aimless for a pilot yet exposition dumps 50 concepts without going into detail about anything that really matters
Realistically I'd unironically rate it a 6/10 going off the pilot alone, both quality and writing wise. Its endearing pan even tried but yeesh, this fell hilariously flat. Better then other youtuber pilots but you can tell why Pan is a cartoon reviewer and NOT a cartoonist.
For advice: drop the two friends of the ugly bowling pin girl theyre entirely superfluous to the plot, streamline the mechanics so its easier to digest, speaking of lore Show don't Tell, give us a reason to care for Bianca's struggles, and maybe ask some of your male friends to voice other characters.
>has heavily stylized humans with thick lineart but doesn't play into the strengths of that, instead animating everyone really smooth and slow.
>overall edited like his videos, leading to a admittedly rough watching experience
>very lil visual distinction between humans and their IRLs, also most or the humans are ugly as sin
>large spaces of deadair where nothing entertaining happens
>every action scene besides the last one is boring
>bianca weighs the whole story down by being deadweight
>pan voices just about every male
>largely aimless for a pilot yet exposition dumps 50 concepts without going into detail about anything that really matters
Realistically I'd unironically rate it a 6/10 going off the pilot alone, both quality and writing wise. Its endearing pan even tried but yeesh, this fell hilariously flat. Better then other youtuber pilots but you can tell why Pan is a cartoon reviewer and NOT a cartoonist.
For advice: drop the two friends of the ugly bowling pin girl theyre entirely superfluous to the plot, streamline the mechanics so its easier to digest, speaking of lore Show don't Tell, give us a reason to care for Bianca's struggles, and maybe ask some of your male friends to voice other characters.