Anonymous
10/17/2025, 8:56:38 PM
No.150880649
>>150880242
The dialogue is just boring and meandering. The characters feel like cardboard cut-outs. Clunky narration, too, that tells what the comic should be showing instead.
>FAIRY LIGHTS, PILLOWS, and PLUSHIES are scattered about, creating a stark contrast to the dreadful and eternally hostile night just outside.
This reads like a note that got left in the final draft.
>Your background is a field of wonderful yellow flowers. These are a very unusual species of flora and ones not very familiar to the more carnivorous variety on your planet.
It's a visual medium, why are you telling me what the character's desktop background looks like? It's just shitting out text for the sake of filling the page.
The dialogue is just boring and meandering. The characters feel like cardboard cut-outs. Clunky narration, too, that tells what the comic should be showing instead.
>FAIRY LIGHTS, PILLOWS, and PLUSHIES are scattered about, creating a stark contrast to the dreadful and eternally hostile night just outside.
This reads like a note that got left in the final draft.
>Your background is a field of wonderful yellow flowers. These are a very unusual species of flora and ones not very familiar to the more carnivorous variety on your planet.
It's a visual medium, why are you telling me what the character's desktop background looks like? It's just shitting out text for the sake of filling the page.