>>11365356
i think the drop shadow not being a standardized size/offset/opacity proportional to font size is the main thing that breaks immersion, and i think the text hearts are also not great, since you can search "heart emoticon" online, find one you like, then copy paste it into your editing program, and change the color to anything you'd like it to be, since unless it's an emoji, it should be able to be colored like any other font. or you can outright just edit in heart images or anything else like some editors do, but i've never tried anything like that myself. i think there're probably grammatical errors or at least unconventionally-formatted things in there, but as a fellow verbose caption-maker, i appreciate going for broke!!!