>>11405706
>I’d find it way more appealing without those elements. Like maybe just have a girl whose gluttony makes her do morally questionable things to sate it.
100000% agree on both. I do hate bursting or implied bursting, I'd much rather the horror come from the girl in question mentally battling her hunger until it's clear that there's no resisting it and that it's consuming their mind and degrading their personality into a ravenous, demanding monster bit-by-bit.