Assuming that Draigc is in the thread like they sometimes are:

Summer Festival has a fun theme, but you probably could have tightened up the editing a bit. Some of the visuals don't quite sync right to the beat, and sometimes you focus the camera on censored bits too much. Good to see that you're playing around with some things though, like punctuating moments in the track with a moan from the source material, or cutting between two different clips as a kind of back and forth.