>>8653060
Get ready for vanilla central: I would take a ton of stuff from ANIM's Bokudaka1, but make some key changes. I love the wife's personality, her design, the slow burn setup, her POV, and the main bull, and would feel no shame just taking all that good stuff wholesale. And then the things I'd like to change would be:
- I'd make it even more of a slow burn. Honestly, the setup to the first sex is the juiciest part of the story. The reason the first sex is as hot as it is is because it had such a big buildup. I think you could stretch that further for an even bigger payoff. Some of the key checkpoints like the first handjob with the bull feel just a little too abrupt, and I'd like more story bridging that gap, for example.
- I'd like more husband and wife interaction during scenes with the bull. The husband is there all the way until the first sex, but they never talk during the first sex, or even hold hands, and after that the husband always chooses to be absent. I would much prefer him be there always, watching the spectacle live, communicating with her, touching her. The reclaiming scenes later are fine, but not doing stuff live feels like a big missed opportunity.
- I would nix the other bulls. I honestly don't really care about the wife fucking many dudes in an NTS. Just one bull is fine, and would keep the scope of the story more manageable.
- I would nix the really late game stuff. Her going on trips with the bull, anal, preggo sex. That stuff, and more extreme NTS staples, just doesn't interest me much. I'd rather do the juicy parts and make them hit hard, and then have the couple decide that they're done with NTS and end the game before overstaying its welcome.
- I would make the couple have better communication. I'm not a big fan of them hiding stuff when interrogated. The game justified it by making it so the bull is always keeping everyone informed, so they usually know that the other knows, but I wish they would just talk to each other.