I tried adjusting some of the stuff you guys said, though I didn't understand what you meant with some of it like how to fix the head. I tried to upload the card to catbox to see if any of you guys could take a crack at it but it's just telling me "Uploads paused! Please wait...". What's that about?

Also she looks way too leggy to me. They aren't supposed to be chibi characters or anything but they're not supposed to be like, full proportions either.