Anonymous
11/8/2025, 12:23:40 PM
No.8767533
>>8767502
If chapter 3 was just a one shot hentai, it would've been a good one, but it has the pretense of being a story driven hentai spanning multiple volumes and it's already the third chapter: in all chapters the story is driven by dumb situations and dumb decisions being made...
The problem is just that the story is so dumb that for me having multiple books of this is pointless: it will just copy/paste the same thing till the end.
I understand fans defending their loved author, but if the author has the pretense of writing a story and the story is really dumb, it's necessary for readers to point what's wrong with it... Just my 2 cents...
If chapter 3 was just a one shot hentai, it would've been a good one, but it has the pretense of being a story driven hentai spanning multiple volumes and it's already the third chapter: in all chapters the story is driven by dumb situations and dumb decisions being made...
The problem is just that the story is so dumb that for me having multiple books of this is pointless: it will just copy/paste the same thing till the end.
I understand fans defending their loved author, but if the author has the pretense of writing a story and the story is really dumb, it's necessary for readers to point what's wrong with it... Just my 2 cents...