Anonymous
10/12/2025, 11:21:43 PM
No.7755754
>>7755752
Axx'pos vs Adel: Adel
I studied Game Development and I vowed to never make games ever. Adels game is finished and Axx'pos is not. I see potential with Axx'pos' game, but will never play it. I have watched a playthrough of Adels game and it is pretty fun by the looks of it.
Clovis vs Berry: Berry
Clovis has a dynamic way of presenting, but sometimes I'd like my images to not jitter into a headache. I did love the team dynamic and especially rubber golem. For some reason, the feeling I get from Clovis is not that he is angry, but like he has an overdosis teenage angst.
Berry's entry shows doesn't give the same feeling of teenage angst, but to me paints a stronger picture of a man who is a real cunt. I liked the ending too
Ririna vs Kelly: Kelly
I am incredibly biased to anything that has no set-in-stone ending. I like the approach and it is new and refreshing, but it is very frustrating for me.
Kelly was basically only goofs till the last 2 pages, enjoyable.
Menachemmendelle vs Houndclops:
I AM LE BETTER ARTIST. Jokes aside, HC did portray Mendi better as a trickster, it shows that he understands how to write character alot better than me, since most of mine are just very alike, very boring. HC showed to understand my own character better than I do.
Birthday Knight vs Aiyori: Aiyori
Birthday Knight brings alot of visual spectable with wild pastels, but for me it makes it harder to read and it takes away from the experience.
I did like the schizophrenic rambling of Aiyori, on top of the raw black and white art.
Leon vs Smoke: Smoke
Leon got smoked.
I have to admit I haven't with my whole brain there, but the novella was an interesting read nevertheless, shining light on different parts.
Axx'pos vs Adel: Adel
I studied Game Development and I vowed to never make games ever. Adels game is finished and Axx'pos is not. I see potential with Axx'pos' game, but will never play it. I have watched a playthrough of Adels game and it is pretty fun by the looks of it.
Clovis vs Berry: Berry
Clovis has a dynamic way of presenting, but sometimes I'd like my images to not jitter into a headache. I did love the team dynamic and especially rubber golem. For some reason, the feeling I get from Clovis is not that he is angry, but like he has an overdosis teenage angst.
Berry's entry shows doesn't give the same feeling of teenage angst, but to me paints a stronger picture of a man who is a real cunt. I liked the ending too
Ririna vs Kelly: Kelly
I am incredibly biased to anything that has no set-in-stone ending. I like the approach and it is new and refreshing, but it is very frustrating for me.
Kelly was basically only goofs till the last 2 pages, enjoyable.
Menachemmendelle vs Houndclops:
I AM LE BETTER ARTIST. Jokes aside, HC did portray Mendi better as a trickster, it shows that he understands how to write character alot better than me, since most of mine are just very alike, very boring. HC showed to understand my own character better than I do.
Birthday Knight vs Aiyori: Aiyori
Birthday Knight brings alot of visual spectable with wild pastels, but for me it makes it harder to read and it takes away from the experience.
I did like the schizophrenic rambling of Aiyori, on top of the raw black and white art.
Leon vs Smoke: Smoke
Leon got smoked.
I have to admit I haven't with my whole brain there, but the novella was an interesting read nevertheless, shining light on different parts.