Anonymous
10/20/2025, 4:53:16 AM
No.7765675
>>7765497
The shading/coloring is just really not great. I know this is going to be a very /ic/ answer, but I don't get the sense that you really know how lighting fundies work, it's symbolic in a way that only comes off as amateur, like pillow shading, and some obvious form mistakes makes this very clear. Nothing feels like a real form with a sense of volume. Which is pretty important when you're trying to accentuate sexy anatomy bits. Form should be your number 1 priority with these, everything else is secondary, tertiary, quaternary, whatever.
>This reeks of gacha
Also this. I cannot see these characters being slotted into a world regardless of fantasy level. The snowflake runway fashion look just doesn't work. Apart from maybe the fox girl thing, they come off as wildly impractical. Even if you're doing high-fantasy designs, they still have to work in-universe.
They're also just... boring. I'm not feeling any thematic followthrough with these either. I don't get the sense that there was much of a 'character' intended with these, but more like they're a bunch of visual tropes stapled together. Like a naive assumption of 'anime cyber sword girl', but lacking any actual depth to what that implies. Your characters should still be a defined character, even if you're just doing one-offs. Even if you're just focusing on outfits, your outfits have to be doing something interesting and novel.
The shading/coloring is just really not great. I know this is going to be a very /ic/ answer, but I don't get the sense that you really know how lighting fundies work, it's symbolic in a way that only comes off as amateur, like pillow shading, and some obvious form mistakes makes this very clear. Nothing feels like a real form with a sense of volume. Which is pretty important when you're trying to accentuate sexy anatomy bits. Form should be your number 1 priority with these, everything else is secondary, tertiary, quaternary, whatever.
>This reeks of gacha
Also this. I cannot see these characters being slotted into a world regardless of fantasy level. The snowflake runway fashion look just doesn't work. Apart from maybe the fox girl thing, they come off as wildly impractical. Even if you're doing high-fantasy designs, they still have to work in-universe.
They're also just... boring. I'm not feeling any thematic followthrough with these either. I don't get the sense that there was much of a 'character' intended with these, but more like they're a bunch of visual tropes stapled together. Like a naive assumption of 'anime cyber sword girl', but lacking any actual depth to what that implies. Your characters should still be a defined character, even if you're just doing one-offs. Even if you're just focusing on outfits, your outfits have to be doing something interesting and novel.