Anonymous
10/31/2025, 6:39:31 PM
No.7778794
>>7778281
Just my two cents. It's "okayish" visual wise, "decent" if we're talking webcomics quality, as the bottom of the barrel for that is really low. At points it is hard to tell what is happening and it's sometimes hard to tell what I am looking at. There is some definite room for improvement. I think working on your line strength, weight and line consistency would help immensely and doing some studies in those areas. The anatomy needs work too. "Framed Ink" book would help a lot I think, and then doing some master studies from your favorite works that are parallel to your current style you are trying to emulate or create. The story is the strongest point currently. I'd say just keep working on the comic and trying to improve as you go and ask for more critiques as well.
Just my two cents. It's "okayish" visual wise, "decent" if we're talking webcomics quality, as the bottom of the barrel for that is really low. At points it is hard to tell what is happening and it's sometimes hard to tell what I am looking at. There is some definite room for improvement. I think working on your line strength, weight and line consistency would help immensely and doing some studies in those areas. The anatomy needs work too. "Framed Ink" book would help a lot I think, and then doing some master studies from your favorite works that are parallel to your current style you are trying to emulate or create. The story is the strongest point currently. I'd say just keep working on the comic and trying to improve as you go and ask for more critiques as well.