Anonymous
10/31/2025, 8:23:29 PM
No.7778887
>>7778281
I read the oneshot, it's pretty boring, the plot is predictable and full of cliches.
The art is bad but serviceable.
But there are good points too: the pacing is decent and it flows well overall.
I'd focus on iterating more on your ideas before you commit: try to avoid the obvious first thing that comes to mind. Try making some short 4-panel stories, along with more one shots.
I read the oneshot, it's pretty boring, the plot is predictable and full of cliches.
The art is bad but serviceable.
But there are good points too: the pacing is decent and it flows well overall.
I'd focus on iterating more on your ideas before you commit: try to avoid the obvious first thing that comes to mind. Try making some short 4-panel stories, along with more one shots.