Anonymous
9/14/2025, 7:39:46 PM
No.24723218
>>24707500
>>24710610 is being a faggot, sentence structure is fine, flow is good. You could make some improvements, third paragraph has 'trotted a goat' then 'common features in all Toggenburger goats' in the next sentence, maybe mix up the second one with something like 'features found in all of the Toggenburger breed' etc, but it's a good start overall.
>>24710610 is being a faggot, sentence structure is fine, flow is good. You could make some improvements, third paragraph has 'trotted a goat' then 'common features in all Toggenburger goats' in the next sentence, maybe mix up the second one with something like 'features found in all of the Toggenburger breed' etc, but it's a good start overall.