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>>24790713 is a more formal poem you just inspired me to edit. It's on the "Poetry General" thread. I'm only telling you this because I was too proud to accept your obviously true critique.
**What I mean to say is thank you for putting pressure on me to be less esoteric. I need a 'fire lit under my ass' in that department. -- Because I excuse as pretension or 'deepness,' what in truth is just laziness.