I've wrote what I best could call "heretical fan fiction" and would like some human feedback.
This has a gimmick to it. Each chapter/day has a song that is tied to it. I would recommend listening to the songs to get the full "feeling" of the story.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/135386/boomer-revelations-a-heavy-metal-apocalypse

Prologue: Crazy Train
Day 1: Bat out of Hell
Day 2: Rainbow in the Dark