Redemption
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10/30/2025, 8:31:22 PM
No.6325778
5. Were the parts with glimpses of the city's denizens' lives with the plague to your liking? I didn't want it to be just rat going here and there and levelling up, so I thought I'd insert this kind of more dramatic and relatable touch. I guess it didn't amount to much, just random scenes without much weight... But maybe they added to the dreary atmosphere?
6. I see participation has dropped off as the quest went along, and I think I may know why. There is an issue with my quests where at some point they just become lists of actions without much thought or flowery description put into them, and too little stakes and pressure. Did you feel that happen here? Why do you think participation petered off? I know that it generally occurs in most quests (the dropping off of players), but I sometimes see quests "done right" where player discussion and participation remains high, so I want to know what can be done to retain readers.
If you've read this quest but dropped it at some earlier point in time, mind sharing your thoughts why you did? I will post this in the /qtg/ to see if any anons that were reading it and stopped could give feedback.
That's all for special questions, but if you have any other thoughts or suggestions, please post them.
Thanks for playing again, I will run more quests in the future, I plan on doing a multi-thread romance / slice of life one next.
6. I see participation has dropped off as the quest went along, and I think I may know why. There is an issue with my quests where at some point they just become lists of actions without much thought or flowery description put into them, and too little stakes and pressure. Did you feel that happen here? Why do you think participation petered off? I know that it generally occurs in most quests (the dropping off of players), but I sometimes see quests "done right" where player discussion and participation remains high, so I want to know what can be done to retain readers.
If you've read this quest but dropped it at some earlier point in time, mind sharing your thoughts why you did? I will post this in the /qtg/ to see if any anons that were reading it and stopped could give feedback.
That's all for special questions, but if you have any other thoughts or suggestions, please post them.
Thanks for playing again, I will run more quests in the future, I plan on doing a multi-thread romance / slice of life one next.