Anonymous
8/18/2025, 7:40:18 PM
No.535723105
>>535722573
>The script itself is fine
I'd say Fontaine was the only time when script simply sucked. As you said emotional moments could hit, but rewrites killed any coherency in the story, while writers have no idea what they are doing (let's defend ourself from going to jail in the first two acts - then go to the jail because of some dumb reason in act three - you could easily connect these two things skillfully).
>The script itself is fine
I'd say Fontaine was the only time when script simply sucked. As you said emotional moments could hit, but rewrites killed any coherency in the story, while writers have no idea what they are doing (let's defend ourself from going to jail in the first two acts - then go to the jail because of some dumb reason in act three - you could easily connect these two things skillfully).