>>12346431
Hey friend!
You've made a cool post there, and let me say I think it's just fantastic that you're putting your words on /s4s/. That said, there a couple small ways that you could improve your post:
1: Who are you quoting?
The citizens of /s4s/ hold themselves to a high standard of posting, so when you quote someone, we enjoy hearing whose thoughts you've borrowed.
2: Do you have a grooming guide for mustaches?
Who hasn't had the experience of carefully tending a beautiful mustache, only to have your friends and family tell you it's just too wide? In your future posts, you should consider addressing this issue.
3: Check your privilege
In today's society, many of us have a good deal of unearned privilege because of the color of our skin or sexual preferences. Have you considered the advantage you reap by being in the majority? If not, you should reflect upon this before posting to /s4s/.
Thanks again for stopping by and contributing; it's simply a joy to see someone posting my oc :)
Your fortune: You will meet a dark handsome stranger
