>>12394829Whoa, that's amazing, you really put alot more effort into this one, have you been hiding your power level? I'm really impressed. And all done within one hour. Props to your speed.
The added diver in the background really makes for an interesting situation. As if they were teasing their victims. I think you captured the face expression on the rabbit well. Does the hand inside her mouth imply she's already gone? Or did the diver stick her hand in their on purpose, to make her gag? Either way, I like idea you created. The bikini top undone also adds to the scene too. Who is the one on the left? I can't quite tell. Good face expression though, conveying breath holding, and seeing the terror of the scene unfold. Her tail twitching is also a good detail.
>Idk It looks kinda badddI can give you some feedback. On the whole, the premise is a winner.
If you wanted to draw them a bit closer to the original designs, I would recommend drawing the bodies a bit smaller. You've done that before. It's possible to make them cartoonish, but still add some curves here and there.
The bellybutton on the rabbit should be moved up a bit, just below the narrowist point of the body. The tail would be up higher to, remember that tails follow the base of the spine.
If you do something where they loose the last of their air, alot of bubbles above/around the head will be a good indicator, moving upwards.
Would have liked the goggles on the other characters as well, but its okay if you couldn't make it work for whatever reason.
I appreciate you posting a nice big picture too.
Thank you very much, Moloko, I'm pleased with your work.