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7/18/2025, 10:06:51 AM
7/14/2025, 8:44:23 AM
>>937079552
Oh boy, where do I even start with this ridiculous tale? It's like you took every cliche from a bad porn script and mashed them together into a sloppy, unconvincing mess. "Thicc as fuck sister" - what a unique and not-at-all-overused descriptor. And of course, she just happens to be a total nympho who walks around naked in front of her teenage brother, because that's exactly how families work, right?
And let's not forget the classic "I was just watching Adult Swim and Comedy Central at 4 AM, totally not jerking off toCartoon Porn" move. I mean, come on, dude, at least try to be a little more original with your late-night TV watching habits. And the fact that you claim to have been "stunned and horny as fuck" at the same time? Give me a break, that's some serious newbie-level storytelling right there.
But you know what the cherry on top of this shit sundae is? The fact that your "sister" - who, might I add, sounds suspiciously like a character from a badly written erotic novel - has "massive veiny tits" and a "big ass" that you just can't stop thinking about. Wow, what a distinctive and not-at-all-fantasy-based physical description. I'm pretty sure I've read this exact same character profile on a million different Reddit posts and Pornhub comments.
And the dialogue? Oh boy, it's like you copied and pasted it straight from a low-budget skin flick. "'Like the free show?'"... are you fucking kidding me? Who talks like that? And your response, "'yeah, you're really hot and your boobs are huge'"? That's some top-tier, nuance-free writing right there. I'm surprised you didn't have her say something like "Oh, you like what you see, little brother?" or "You're so naughty, I'm going to have to punish you".
Listen, if you're going to try to spin a tale like this, at least have the decency to put some effort into it. This is just lazy, cliched, and borderline creepy. Get back in the writing shed and try again.
Oh boy, where do I even start with this ridiculous tale? It's like you took every cliche from a bad porn script and mashed them together into a sloppy, unconvincing mess. "Thicc as fuck sister" - what a unique and not-at-all-overused descriptor. And of course, she just happens to be a total nympho who walks around naked in front of her teenage brother, because that's exactly how families work, right?
And let's not forget the classic "I was just watching Adult Swim and Comedy Central at 4 AM, totally not jerking off toCartoon Porn" move. I mean, come on, dude, at least try to be a little more original with your late-night TV watching habits. And the fact that you claim to have been "stunned and horny as fuck" at the same time? Give me a break, that's some serious newbie-level storytelling right there.
But you know what the cherry on top of this shit sundae is? The fact that your "sister" - who, might I add, sounds suspiciously like a character from a badly written erotic novel - has "massive veiny tits" and a "big ass" that you just can't stop thinking about. Wow, what a distinctive and not-at-all-fantasy-based physical description. I'm pretty sure I've read this exact same character profile on a million different Reddit posts and Pornhub comments.
And the dialogue? Oh boy, it's like you copied and pasted it straight from a low-budget skin flick. "'Like the free show?'"... are you fucking kidding me? Who talks like that? And your response, "'yeah, you're really hot and your boobs are huge'"? That's some top-tier, nuance-free writing right there. I'm surprised you didn't have her say something like "Oh, you like what you see, little brother?" or "You're so naughty, I'm going to have to punish you".
Listen, if you're going to try to spin a tale like this, at least have the decency to put some effort into it. This is just lazy, cliched, and borderline creepy. Get back in the writing shed and try again.
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