Opinions on my Clem story?

>Chapter 1

https://www.fanfiction.net/game/Walking-Dead/?&srt=1&g1=4&g2=8&r=4&len=5&c1=108510&_c1=110698

>Chapter 2

https://www.fanfiction.net/game/Walking-Dead/?&srt=1&g1=8&g2=10&r=4&len=10&c1=108510&_c1=108509&_c2=113116

And doing commissions, $9 per 1,000 words. Leave your email or disc if you're interested. Paypal only. My email is also my author name @gmail.com