Gn anons.
>>149087559
Thanks Clem anon, appreciated.
>>149087663
This one is closer in some regards but still missing some things. Jaks almost never have full beards, always unkempt stubbles. The brows are very off. Speech bubbles are uncommonly used, it is usually preferred to to just write speech without bubbles or mention whatever you want to say as in x award, y hat. And when they are used they tend to be more shittily drawn.