Just started this and I think I'll drop it. Feels like I'm reading a wikipedia or something and not a book.
>so then she turned into a cute girl and her power changed to look like this and now the orcs are moving into the subspace and will be our companions and I've never exchanged a word with them but I've only talked to this main heroine for three words

Maybe the WN is better? Maybe this is just EXTREME trimming to save space? I doubt it, if your editor made you cut so much so early, and you did, I have no faith in you anyway. I'm convinced this will just be a waste of time.