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6/19/2025, 6:39:06 AM
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morning actually means in the dead of night after a grueling work day, but I digress. Good start, putting the foot down on the gas; am patiently waiting developments!
>[...]her descending, down into the blackness, down to grab Kasen she realized.
just a small nitpick: she's diving towards a nuke-turned-drift king and not dying because of her unknown manipulation, the whole lake is lit up. Have a good writing~!
morning actually means in the dead of night after a grueling work day, but I digress. Good start, putting the foot down on the gas; am patiently waiting developments!
>[...]her descending, down into the blackness, down to grab Kasen she realized.
just a small nitpick: she's diving towards a nuke-turned-drift king and not dying because of her unknown manipulation, the whole lake is lit up. Have a good writing~!
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