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6/27/2025, 6:32:07 PM
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I'm about four chapters in, and here's what I'm thinking so far:
Well-written, generally easy to read. Feels suitably pony. Humour isn't laugh-out-loud funny, but smirkworthy; none of the jokes flop outright. Chryssi is OOC in both good and bad ways: more level-headed, less pants-on-head, still very much a villain. She's a decent foil to the more comic characters she presides over, but softer and more patient than she ought to be, and she asks a few too many stupid questions. Cherry Berry verges on the 'hypercompetent badass who takes no shit' trope too much for my liking, particularly with how she mogs a weirdly pliant Chryssi. Plenty of dubiously-necessary autism over ponifying some highly specific KSP gameplay mechanics. I'm still basically enjoying it, but I can see immediately why it might get dropped by a lot of people. I can see myself finishing this one.
I'm about four chapters in, and here's what I'm thinking so far:
Well-written, generally easy to read. Feels suitably pony. Humour isn't laugh-out-loud funny, but smirkworthy; none of the jokes flop outright. Chryssi is OOC in both good and bad ways: more level-headed, less pants-on-head, still very much a villain. She's a decent foil to the more comic characters she presides over, but softer and more patient than she ought to be, and she asks a few too many stupid questions. Cherry Berry verges on the 'hypercompetent badass who takes no shit' trope too much for my liking, particularly with how she mogs a weirdly pliant Chryssi. Plenty of dubiously-necessary autism over ponifying some highly specific KSP gameplay mechanics. I'm still basically enjoying it, but I can see immediately why it might get dropped by a lot of people. I can see myself finishing this one.
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