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6/22/2025, 7:03:54 PM
>>42290751
>while rendering a romance in the same way that I think OtEM always intended to,
It pains me to admit this, but I think it's an accurate comparison.
>the vampirism is weak
Unfortunately the story isn't very much about that, only what it makes her, so it gets sort of glossed over very often. I'd have liked if she was more vampiric, though the fic admits that she's probably not a real vampire, just something kind of similar.
>>42290795
>would've been worse if they just did a "comparing notes" section
That would be worse, but what I have an issue with is not long and impactful that section is. I understand the idea behind putting that into the fic, but it feels too long for what it is.
>while rendering a romance in the same way that I think OtEM always intended to,
It pains me to admit this, but I think it's an accurate comparison.
>the vampirism is weak
Unfortunately the story isn't very much about that, only what it makes her, so it gets sort of glossed over very often. I'd have liked if she was more vampiric, though the fic admits that she's probably not a real vampire, just something kind of similar.
>>42290795
>would've been worse if they just did a "comparing notes" section
That would be worse, but what I have an issue with is not long and impactful that section is. I understand the idea behind putting that into the fic, but it feels too long for what it is.
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