>>7663231
the line work is not great, you need to do more observation.

thoughtless lines.

this is my issue with /ic/ people miss the point of fundies. its meant to get results on finished work.
ocd fixing and "correcting" as you go is not a way to get interesting or compelling result.


THINK

WHY are these contour lines at the leg bolder than everywhere else?

WHY HAVE YOU DETAILED THE BANDAID??

think about every line im not joking

people make fun of my abstract art because its childish, but I think through every line.


MID INT

>>7663392

5-6 out of 10.

proficient technical work, many areas read as insecure

the figure shapes are fairly strong, but the shading has way too many value transitions and is a bit haphazard

MID INT

>>7658735

I get the sense your volume is low.

you spend too much time on designs that are not really appealing or good. thoughtless, bit joyless.

look at gundam designs for a few hours and pay attention to the shapes and design purpose

LOW INT