TLanon here, a lil sleep deprived but all good.
Posting the Doc I'll be using to work

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DLOD13P01G9dquhxansYJDmeOO9xyQnI-KmnttdZX3k/edit?usp=sharing

Switched to google docs to make it easier for me to gather all the suggestions together and also for anons to peer review the suggestions so I don't get one guy'd.
I'll start working as soon as I get my hands on a copy.
Once I've finished a full draft then I'll enable suggestions for everyone so that anyone can start dropping suggestions on the script.
Please keep it civil in the doc, if a line needs clarification feel free to ask and I'll explain in more detail what I think it means and we can come to a better consensus on the english TL.