>>8794806
it is decent i guess, but it reads a little bit like AI. AI writing style is an amalgamation of pretty much everything that has ever been written. amateur porn stories that you find off of reddit or something seem to be very prevalent in datasets, and they all kind of use the same words and phrases and transitions. my advice is to insert a few big and complicated words here and there. maybe sprinkle in some fucks or shits in there too. it needs a unique and chaotic touch, but otherwise pretty good. maybe write a paragraph about the goosebumps on her skin or how hard her nipples are. the little micro-sensations that permeate her body during the experience