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6/23/2025, 7:31:14 AM
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To give you a serious answer, focus on character relationships and actual social dynamics (/friendship problems/). Don't make just a generic cartoon plot, make it pony. Don't introduce more than one or two new characters or settings if you have to, and for the love of God, don't rely on callbacks to already-known characters or events.
Keep the core problem simple and realistic, even if the way it's framed is more fantastic or cartoonish. Green Isn't Your Color and Suited for Success are good examples of more mundane plots, but even Dragonshy is about peer pressure, learning to contribute, etc, and Feeling Pinkie Keen is about learning to trust your friends and stop being neurotic, even though both are very fantastic and end with big monster fights.
The best season 1 episodes usually have a plot with several conflicts at once, or a plot that twists unexpectedly multiple times. Going back to Green Isn't Your Color, both Rarity and Fluttershy are upset and hide it from each other, and /also/ Twilight needs to learn to respect their privacy and let them solve their own issue. Sonic Rainboom is about Rainbow's fear of inadequacy, but Rarity's wings are an unexpected factor, and the episode shifts once she decides to enter the contest. Feeling Pinkie Keen is first about Twilight figuring out Pinkie sense, but then they need to go and rescue Fluttershy, and even after that, it's revealed at the very end that the real problem is that Twilight just isn't believing. Even something like Over a Barrel has an interesting twist where Rainbow Dash unexpectedly sides with the buffalo, and that Braeburn and Strongheart want to reconcile while Rainbow and Applejack make things more heated. In Suited for Success, Rarity gets through making the dresses the second time, and thinks everything is finally over, but then Hoity Toity shows up, etc. You get the idea.
Also, just generally keep things light and innocent, not too serious. Write your story as if it were aimed primarily at kids, but would also appeal to a large audience. Maybe think about what kind of letter to Celestia Twilight would write at the end.
To give you a serious answer, focus on character relationships and actual social dynamics (/friendship problems/). Don't make just a generic cartoon plot, make it pony. Don't introduce more than one or two new characters or settings if you have to, and for the love of God, don't rely on callbacks to already-known characters or events.
Keep the core problem simple and realistic, even if the way it's framed is more fantastic or cartoonish. Green Isn't Your Color and Suited for Success are good examples of more mundane plots, but even Dragonshy is about peer pressure, learning to contribute, etc, and Feeling Pinkie Keen is about learning to trust your friends and stop being neurotic, even though both are very fantastic and end with big monster fights.
The best season 1 episodes usually have a plot with several conflicts at once, or a plot that twists unexpectedly multiple times. Going back to Green Isn't Your Color, both Rarity and Fluttershy are upset and hide it from each other, and /also/ Twilight needs to learn to respect their privacy and let them solve their own issue. Sonic Rainboom is about Rainbow's fear of inadequacy, but Rarity's wings are an unexpected factor, and the episode shifts once she decides to enter the contest. Feeling Pinkie Keen is first about Twilight figuring out Pinkie sense, but then they need to go and rescue Fluttershy, and even after that, it's revealed at the very end that the real problem is that Twilight just isn't believing. Even something like Over a Barrel has an interesting twist where Rainbow Dash unexpectedly sides with the buffalo, and that Braeburn and Strongheart want to reconcile while Rainbow and Applejack make things more heated. In Suited for Success, Rarity gets through making the dresses the second time, and thinks everything is finally over, but then Hoity Toity shows up, etc. You get the idea.
Also, just generally keep things light and innocent, not too serious. Write your story as if it were aimed primarily at kids, but would also appeal to a large audience. Maybe think about what kind of letter to Celestia Twilight would write at the end.
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