Shattered Pantheon author here. Thank you to the last anons who gave feedback. I tried a different approach for the blurb. Let me know if it's still poopoo doodoo.

I also changed the cover as per anon's suggestion to suit the change in tone.

Also, to FFF-Bro, Sorry, I gave the first 2 chapters a go, but it just isn't for me. I'll say you seem to have an interesting setting in mind, and your descriptions are nice, but I think you need to keep things brief in places. It often felt like I was being met by a wall of text that could have been better communicated with half the word count.

I don't want to critique too much since I don't think I'm any better, but I hope this at least helps to know how others might be receiving your early chapters. I myself think I will need to rewrite my early chapters for similar reasons. Though in my case, I rushed too much to get the setup out the way.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/118792/shattered-pantheon